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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pleeeeeeeeeease update!!!! i luv it so dont fuckin stop there!!! plz dont!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! great story. really hot. i like itttt! i'm only on ch. 11 tho so i still got more to go. idk if ch. 16 is the end of the story, but if its not keep it up!!! cya
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi, i just wanted to sy *WOW* your story is soo amazing, i'm sure you've heard this alot but WOW, i love how you do marshal, it's nice to see somone who can see how he really is, not just some big rap icon. I respect your writing skills and can't wait to read the new chapters.
yours truly megan
yours truly megan
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's really nice to see some GOOD Eminem stories once in a while!!!! KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! an update! I loved it. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I am really getting into this story. Marshall showing his real side compared to what he has to do when he is working shows something special in him. I like how he interacted with Brian. I think he kinda sees himself in him. great story, I like marshall with allie. more soon i hope.
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm impressed, normally I don't like eminem fanfic (there's only a couple ones I like), but I always read them because I hope there will be a good one, and I must say yours is very good. You have developed the characters into humans with layers, that is often missing. I just wanted to say please keep up the great work.
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mary this is an awesome eminem story. I love how the characters get together, how you look back on Kim's relationship. well basically what I'm trying to say is good plot. Anyways awesome fic and update soon
Cya Lata,
Jokerfest (seriously i got the face paint and everything, LOL)
Cya Lata,
Jokerfest (seriously i got the face paint and everything, LOL)
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it Please write some more
that would be great
that would be great