rate_review Reviews

this is really a great story.ope ope you update soon!

Hi!

i LOVE your fic! I started reading it at blooming library but you only posted till chapter 3 there so imagine my surprise when i see it posted here at adultfanfiction!!! i was like thrilled! and here i know how to review the fics.. i just can't understand the review sistem there... ( i know... i'm dense but please bear with me...)

i love the deveraux character! everything in her is just great! i specially love how she gets when our loving main character gets all touchy... lolol

damn that blonde... but she doesn't sta cha channce against deveraux's charm... which is going to appear soon... lolol her addiction with cookies is so funny.. but how i understand her....

i can't wait for the next chapter!

please please PLEASE update as soon as you can.. i'll be waiting!

stay well

************ Alyanah

Hi! this is just a kind of P.S. here...

i was reading the reviews and i got scared.. mine is the longest... i hope you don't get bored reading it... also my mail was wrong in the first review... it was missing a S...

And would please (only if you can or feel like it) send me an email when you post the next chapter?


thank you so much anyway!

stay well

********** Alyanah (again) ;)

I liked it a lot!! You made the main charcter seem real like most of us girls really are!!

Just read the latest chapter! I'm loving it! Please keep it up and I look forward to your next installment! Thanks!!!!

yay! updates! keep up the great work! please hurry and update im dying to find out what happens!

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY you updated! kudos

Oh my god i think i just invented a new phrase.. falling out of chair laughing my ass off.. or rolling in chair laughing.. i LOVE Devie.... she is sooo cute.. and .. dramatic.. lol.. heheheh.. i can so see myself doing those things.. staring at his hands... and the first scene of them meeting when she is making cookies and he keeps coming back in... lol.. priceless...really OMG i sooo can not wait for the next part.. lol.. hehe.. thanks.. trenee

yes! you continued! please continue more! sorry i didn't review the other chapters.
::tamara::

This is such a great story! I Love It! I can oh so relate!

Please update soon! I'm dying to find out more!