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for Midnight Butterfly

by Skwishee

person pink1mullet6
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god i love this story!!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE pulezz *^^*
person ShiftyNit
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
a while back i read ch 10 of this fic in an LJ comm (tho i dont remember which one). i just stumbled across it here today & i must say i love it. the whole story is great. please continue.
person PHACKSTURRZ
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I lurve on it. <3 I think I already read this one chapter before though... XD Have you posted it at the uhm. The jrockyaoi community thingy on LJ? >___> Maybe the KaoxKyo one, too... o_O

BUT.

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER. XD Kinky. X3; Can't wait 'til the next one. <3
person illicitdreamandroid
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg O_O

please... PLEASE UPDATE O_o

[twitch twitch twitch]

person Brekke
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just wanted to let you know that I really like this story! ^_^ and your writing skill has vastly improved since the veeginegining chapters, I really like how you switch between the POV very eaily! Please write more soon!
person Zin
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh, showerlemon! *luvs* I just love the way you are making Kyo so adorable and slutty. ^^ But now everytime I take a shower I'm going to have dirty images of Kyo and Kaoru fucking! *nooooo* XD
btw, don't worry about taking too much time with chapters, people can wait when they know they are getting some hot lemony goodness. ^.^
person Shintotchi
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was another wonderful chapter. ^^ I'm afraid each time Kyo went to reach for something, or when he was in the shower, I was expecting Totchi to slide in. XD In the next chapter, could you please define all three of their relationships? Is it a threesome or what? My mind's all boggled up. Ah but in any case, I loved it!
person Blue Cheese
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing, Skwish. Its so sad *tear*. Ypu can really feel Kyo's...what can you call it? Sorrow?. Whatever it is, its there and I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Square thongs a little irritating but its still incredible. You Rule!!!!!
person Jess
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Get the next chapter up! I love this fic ^^ One of the best I've ever read <3
person Lure
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would just like to say that your story is absolutely incredible! I love the way that you express the emotions and what not of each member to an extef maf making it completely believable. Please update again soon! (by the way, was Kyo really engaged and was it really Kisaki that hit him with the fire extinguisher?)

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