rate_review Reviews

You've created such a dark sensual atmosphere almost effortlessly here. Please update soon, I really enjoyed reading your story.

Foraoo.

Yes, well. I was just wondering if you've ever read Anne Rice? If you have, I think you should consider making some things your own, rather than coping her style, as well as her original idea of a newly turned vampire. I don't mean any of this in a bad, because I am enjoying your story, despite the similarities. It is just that I think you try and find your own style, and maybe change your vampires to make your own particular view of their kind. Sorry, I really don't mean to sound harsh. I'm going to go read the second chapter now. Your story is really interesting.

This story is so brilliant and well written. You have to keep going!

Greetings

Mariasha