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June 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Okay, first, please do not include my penname in any future postings as a character. You do not have my permission to do so.
Second, I'm going to suggest that you give all postings a read-through before putting them up on site. You have punctuation errors in this, and it's only seven sentences long.
Third, the premise of your summary indicated a much longer tale. Should you choose to come back to this and post the rest of the story, there may be more to comment on for an in-depth review.
Happy writing.
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I must say. This story is pretty fun and very unique. I absolutely adore it. The grammer is good and the writing style great. Keep up the good work.
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! you still didn't update. Y? I m really looking forward to reading more. So if you could please
update. And as a reader I have a jod to do....and that is telling others about your fic...
others like me sister. hehehe :smiles:
update. And as a reader I have a jod to do....and that is telling others about your fic...
others like me sister. hehehe :smiles:
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im not pullin ur leg. like the story.want u to update.
-_^ (sry not a good review)
U write me read =P
Can't wait!
-_^ (sry not a good review)
U write me read =P
Can't wait!
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
why don't you update,......i wanna know what happens next
it's really good so far
it's really good so far
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope you writethe next chapter soon. I enjoyed the first chapter and can't wait to read more.
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
are you ever gonna post this story again. i think it's a great first chapter and i'd like to find out what happens next
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOOOON! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ I WANT MORE! I'M LUVIN THIS! Also update Two little words plz! BLOODY BRILLANT MATE! I WANT MORE! Poor boy,His mama must be a real bitch to do something to a sweet inoccent child like that! UPDATE:D
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Update the story please I want to find out why Mikey's mom left him.
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!I love your story so far!That is so like Lance!He's so sweet!Don't stop writing!!!!Your very good at it!Love ya!