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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shmoly the first chapter was slow but you kicked in on 2. Here is to you (lighter being lit aloft.). Please work some more on it I love the girls.
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September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has great potential! Update soon!
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great. Post more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz:D.
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!! It's brilliant!! :-)
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update soon, oke?
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it.
You wrote it well but the POV signs were a little bit too suttle you need to make them more noticable.
You wrote it well but the POV signs were a little bit too suttle you need to make them more noticable.
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am reviewing 'cause I want to read F/F/F but I think, personally, that review hording is wrong.
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW, excelent story you got here start putting more chapetrs up soon
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please.
write.
more.
NOW!
write.
more.
NOW!