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i like this story and can not wait to read more.
Keep up the good work

i love this story its soo sweet. please rite more

I love it!!! I can't wait until you write the wedding!!!!!

I must admit, I was very disappointed in this story. First of all, your summary was entirely misleading. I was looking forward to seeing your OC get the crap kicked out of her by OrleA goA good face slashing or the like. And then, I find out you’ve written an AU story without even indicating it as such. A ni“Thi“This takes place in an alternate universe where movies are awarded Grammies” is needed. Your summary and disclaimer skills need work. Keep writing! *shit-eating grin*

I love the stso fso far. I don't want ot seem nit picky, but you did ask for help.

But I caught a typo, you wrote; ^“It is always the guys fault! So there” She turn towards him and stuck her tounge out at him and he made a face back.^

The correction is: “It is always the guy’s fault! So there.” She turned towards him and stuck her tongue out at him as he made a face back.

Another teeny mistake that your spell/grammar check doesn't always catch: ^“Oh my lord, you TOO are already acting married.” Elijah laughed at the both of them.^ The TOO should be a TWO.

Third: ^They smiled and turned back to face him, “a week” they stated together.^; should be: They smiled and turned back to face him, “A week.” They stated together.

I loved it!!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE MORE!!!!

I love this fic, very sweet so far *gasps in realization* *glances questioningly at author* Okay what curveballs are you going to through us, or is it just going to be a sweet fic? God that girl must have some will power, I know if I were her and engaged to Orlando, heaven help me cause I wouldn't be able to keep that promise. LOL. Please update soon.