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by Line

person Liz
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my ****ing god this is a good story! Theres simply no way its your first, since its SO good, I mean I want more damnit!

I read chapters 1-9a at work... in my cubicle... With people all around me... God that was stupid >.< I had all kinda of people staring at me like 'Liz? Whats wrong? Why do you have that blank stare and little bit of drool?' But I didn't answer for obvious reasons...

You have to continue this, I mean I never thought of these two being together but well they fit SO good when you write it, you simply must continue. I added this to the TOP of my favorites list and I'll check back every day if I have to to see some more.

I have but one complaint... You stopped before the juicy stuff! That is so insanely mean of you I dont even know how to put the mean-ness into words lol
person Aviona
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope there will be an update soon. I can't wait to see this two in action. ;) Please, you left us hanging with that last chapter. More please!
person Anon
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*nnngh*
i want *more*!
the hotness!!!!!!
update soon? pLeAse!?
person Brae905
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's good just finish the damn fiction. i wanna see what happens between the two. Please keep writing.
person aissa!
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lineeeee!!! don't u dare make us wait that long again! don't u dare! show us the good stuff now please. i may need some rehab too if u don't. *g* i'm hauling myself to brighton right this minute. *bg*

update soon pwease?
person Tetra
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol! Nick is such a rambler, it's cute! This is oh so brief, Line, I hope you update soon. I can't wait for the next one. And, oh, don't make us wait that long again. Okay?

Love the update. As always. But, more please? :)
person Nishia
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOO HOO!!! Great to have you back hun. It feels like forever but it was worth the wait. I can soooooo picture them in my mind, grinding together on the sofa. *fan self* I just know I'm going to pass out from the heat when they finally get to the bedroom.
person Fefs
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! That was good! But.. i feel like pulling my hair out... i CAN'T wait for the next chapter!! Please update right now! *smiles* just kidding.. take your time.. but please don't take too much of it? i'm dying here... hugs!!
person Tetra
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"I have absolutely no intention on giving up on this story! None whatsoever!"

I sincerely hope you haven't changed your mind. :(
person Fefs
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just found this fic and i already hate you for not updating (not really)
But real life can be a pain.. i'm sure it'll be worth to wait. Hugs!

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