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by mystique2078

person Matty
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was really well done, specially for your first fic(is that what you said, that it was your first?) and i found the parts were he broke into French really sexy ... You hardly see any Hockey Centered fics .. at least *I* have hardly seen any .. so i hope that you continue ...

:o)
person Lazvernius
schedule April 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a sport fic! and a good one too, well done.
person Dev
schedule April 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat story myst
person Pudds
schedule April 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hummmmmmm not bad for a first attempt at capturing the heat of passion between two people that are highly attracted to one another. On a sexual level of course. For a short story it sure does bring out the sense of it really happening. Quick but sure.

Look forward to your next instalment. Hurry though. I want to know who wins in the hockey.

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