rate_review Reviews

First off, if you're going to write a damn fan fiction, spell names right! It's JONATHAN DAVIS! Gr. Sorry...MAJOR pet peeve.

I don't really like this. You've got some major formatting issues and it's extremely choppy writing. Maybe a little more work, this would be good.

And characters...you're way off on personality and what not. I don't like the pairings, this doesn't work well. So... I don't know. It's okay for a first try. You've got some potential.

Wow. OO That was extremely wierd, messed up, cool, depressing, fascinating and just plain FUCKED UP. All in one. I've never really read gay fiction, but sometimes I put up with it. *sigh* It makes me wonder, how many times has Jon actually been that close to killing himself? *sigh* It makes me sad......Where were Fieldy and David during all this? Forgive me if you stated so, I was kind not paying attention to the first part. ^^'

The Forsaken Freak

I like it. It's a little choppy and bunched together but, all in all, I like it.

Sorry, I cannot bring myself to read your story, Jonathan and Darren.....too close to some of the stuff from JD's past. All those issues he told us about. I personally find it hard to see someone paired in this way knowing of the sexual abuse he suffered as a young child. (no it wasnt at the hands of anyone you mention)
Feel a bit sichankhanks for making me react this way, its totally out of character for me.
and a reaction is the most important thin
Well done

how could you do that to Jhonathan !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????????????????

WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU PORTRAYING JON AS A FUCKING WHORE!!! Korn is teh best band there has been in the longest so stop the bullshit. Write about P.O.D they suck anyways