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for The War (In The Beginning)

by pensfan100

person Caz
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! ::sniffle:: coe on, Bonnie, make it better. Make it HEAPS better :D
person Caz
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to it already, Bonnie :D
person pensfan100
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please bear with me! I am into writing the next chapter, but I have been getting called to substitute teach a LOT and haven't been able to devote a lot of time to writing. I am going to try and get more done tomorrow. I know what happens next, it's just the matter of actually getting a chance to sit down, uninterrupted, and get it down. I'll try to get it done this week.
person vader\'s slave
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. Are you going to update soon? I need closure here. It's been more than two weeks. *whine* Can't wait for the next chappie.
person Ali
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE THIS SOON!! I need my drug! Hehe... This is really good. Just a little advice you're making it seem like HAyden has gone soft. I hope you plan to bring him back full force. I can't wait for you to update this...
person Joe C
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! More! This is excellent! Please update soon!
person Monkey
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so powerful. I only hope it ends happily! Thanks for the update.
person stag
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*whimpers* update?
person Stag
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, you gotta love it when Hayden is sexily up to something. *waits for next chappy*
person Caz
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOLOLOL! What number is the next round, Bonnie?? LOLOL! That, my dear, was bloody superb. So good that you brought tears to my eyes, and I wish you'd made Natalie do the same too. There must have been tears for the amount of pain in that amazing f***. Brilliant stuff. Can't wait for the next chapter.
p.s. thanks for the plug :D

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