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by EnchanteNoir

schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mm mm good! LOL! I'm REALLY looking forward to the sequel and I really LOVE your writing! Keep it going!
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, I hated it. But... Jonathan is my baby, I'm obsessed and it makes me squirm to see him portrayed like this. I can't help it! But that doesn't mean the story itself is bad. Do you get what I mean? I don't know, you're a good writer and this had some good drama and plot line to it. I just don't like seeing Jon written like some kind of monster. Lol... I'm a freak, I know hu? Anyway, well done with the story, keep writing.
person genevive
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi!
just read ur fic and i gotta say....that its a bit scary, jonathan is anyways and i find it a bit strange that you say you love korn when you write that sort of stuff out!
but it is well written, very descriptive, the content is a bit extreme but meh, godd job
give it 2.5/5
person Chaos_strain
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wahhh...so tragic....
really sad that Jonathan got put in that light, cuz I love him so much....but it still made for a really good story....
Please write more soon!
person Anon
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! This was sooo sweet! Although I prefer M/M fics, this is really good work!
I love your fics, especially because the main character is mostly Chester ^_^
Good job, and keep up with writing, we love you all!!!! XD
person kirksgirl1785
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wooohooo...i was so excited when i read this, and now that i know theres a sequel i cant wait! Hmmm I have a feeling Jonathan is going to be a bad bad man again lol. Is it weird if i think thats hot? lol
person BriannaHahn
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo! Now THAT was a good ending to the story! And since you're titling the sequel Carousel: The Revenge, I'm guessing that Jonathan escapes from prison or tries to kill Majestique again somehow... I can't wait to see it!! Write it soon, please? Don't make me get out the puppy-dog eyes! :-P
person Cat
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My poor, poor, Nonie!

*grabs Jonathan*

Great story, really well written. But Nonie's not that evil.......honestly, he's not.
person LoserxKid
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, It's awesome.
person Bee
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story keeps ya on the edge of ur seat!! Great work cant wait for the next chapter!!

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