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by EnchanteNoir

person BriannaHahn
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh, I get it now; you're a Chazzy Chaz fan! ;-) Can't say I blame you; if I wasn't so in love with Joe, I'd want Chaz myself. *chuckles* Well, you wanted a review; here's one! I must say, please finish this story!!! PLEASE! This is one of the few times I've ever read about a believeable rape story and the reactions of Majestique are right on! (I have a degree in psychology; you'll have to forgive me. *LOL*) This story is just as well written as the other one of yours I reviewed; few spelling mistakes here and there, but eh, who cares right? I know I've probably got a few in my story. *chuckles* It's so hard to find a writer who can actually make you believe in what they are writing, but you have that knack, I must admit. So please, keep writing and update this story soon!
person brianna
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was evil....but good...but as long as you are going to finish it up soon then i have no complaints. im sorry people dont know how to review...they suck. but u and me...we rock. muahaha. anyways thanx for the dedication. i feel all specials and stuff. now u need to stop reading this and go and write the next chap. so i can review on that one too...ps. i really like that one...it was goooooood....gave a peak of maj.'s life....good stuffs...good stuffs...now GO!!!
person brianna
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was sweeeet....i really like this story....keep it up and put up ch. 3 sooooon....i really like your writing...please hurry and write more soon....

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