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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The switch from a happy, lighthearted story to that of a dark tragedy came a little to quickly (at least in my paragraph-skimming eyes), but besides that, it was beautiful. I still can't believe it almost made me cry. Anyway,
Yrs.
Fenton Durham.
Yrs.
Fenton Durham.
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, i just read the whole story and i cried...which is odd...your right, life isnt all rainbows and puppies, shit happens and there is nothing people can do about it, i applaude thee for your ability in writing. now im going to go find my BF cuz im horny as hell too
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beautiful, absolutely beautiful. im speachless
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, the ending is so sad *sniff*. the story is good, very good, but the ending kinda makes my heart hurt...Maybe you can write a new series or something, that would be cool.
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great story, and then you had to go and ruin it! J/K
But really, it was great even though the ending wasn't "good". I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks!
But really, it was great even though the ending wasn't "good". I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks!
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February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww......I am still crying from that story! *sniffle* But it's still really, insanely great! Keep on writing...
*cries some more*
Jenn~
*cries some more*
Jenn~
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well i love the story.you are verry good with it.but the ending was verry sad and i wich you would have cept her alive but still it was a great story.
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was a graet story. you did verry good in it . and the ending was verry sad for me but you maid it up by the baby.it was a great story.
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wahhhh, that's was so sad but it has a great ending. I have a lil' boy his just 3 wks old and i love him and his father more than life itself so thids story really got me to tears but it's a great story and your a wonderful writer keep it up
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg. this story started out so good. i loved it. then when she had to tell something to Orlando i knew she had to be pregnant. but when she died i lost it. i started crying cuz this story was so happy throughout the most part but then boom. shes dead. so sad. wonderful though but sad.