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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow... This was such a beautiful story. It was so bittersweet and then that ending... It sure brought a happy, goofy, relieved smile to my face. I just hate Jeffydeathfics but for some morbid reason I can't stop reading them, either. It's just that they tend to be, like this was, so agonizingly angsty and beautifully sad and... I could go on forever. Well, not but long enough for everyone to lose interest so it doesn't matter.
The only negative thing I found to comment about was the odd jumping between the present and past tenses, sometimes even in the middle of a sentence.
The only negative thing I found to comment about was the odd jumping between the present and past tenses, sometimes even in the middle of a sentence.
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
review..... review....... FINISH IT!!!!!