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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Nice story you got here! Although I did get confused at which was Darren, an Daniel...but once I find out, I'll imagine it clearly! Anyhow, this was HOT!! Heh, I liked how you put their personalities together! And don't worry about the spelling and grammar! It's great! Hey, even other people who've known english all their lives mess up a lot. And I mean a lot! You only had some simple mistakes, but nothin' much! It was good overall!! I hope you make more!! Laterz! ^_^