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by Zilo

person SioniL
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just caught on with this story and I'm glad I finally did. I love the characterizations of both Marshall and Norman. It's an AU so it's not them exactly but it's still them. I hope that made sense.

I'm excited to see what adventures this 2 (or 3?) will stumble upon. I hope you update soon.
person Lauralee
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROPE.
person blast
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is just proof on why slash is my fic preference. this is what creativity is all about. please update soon.
person Aissa
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An update! woot!

"Marshall turns around slightly to catch Norman’s view just as she turns, catches his gaze and gives him a dirty look."

Somebody's jeaaaaalous. :D That's so cute. Pats Marsh on the head.

For some reason, I think Sean knocked out cold and tied up in a trunk is hot. I wonder why? hehe

Good job and keep the updates coming. I hope you update your other fic, too.
person Line
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!!! I didn't know I could read minds! *grin* Anyway, this was a great chapter! I love how Norman is sorta ruthless! Go you! And you managed to get Sean in too! Woohoo! LOL Hurry up and update! *bounce*
person cole
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a very sexy pairing and i'm so happy that you wrote them. y'know why it works? norman has this sexy devilish, naughty face and marshall, despite what non-fans know about him and cannot see, has this innocent, baby angel face. then there's also the height difference that makes them all the more adorable. together they make such a lovely pairing. it's good chemistry. keep on updating this. you have me hooked.
person Lauralee
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A friend of mine pointed me to this story, and we both agree. This SHOULDN'T work, but oh my god it does. I love it! And am completely taken by the idea of Norman-as-a-thief. Can't wait to read more!
person Line
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, not a pairing I would have thought of, but hey...it works! *grin* This is really good! I don't know why, but it sorta remind me of Thelma and Louise...I know I'm weird! LOL But I love the angst and the selfdestructiveness (is that a word?). Please update soon! *grin*
person Tetra
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is so hot and so full of angst. This is so good. I am so antsy for the next update. I agree with Line. This so reminds me of Thelma and Louise. Though I hope they wont drive down a ravine. OMG, Noooo! The sexy hitchhiker scene would be most preferable. I could go for Aissa's suggestion of a threesome with Sean Flannery. He can be the Brad Pitt replacement. *grin*

I think I'm about to zone out to that happy place where there's a Norman-Marshall-Sean threesome. *grin* Update soon!
person Aissa
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is full of angst but for some reason it makes me so happy. I think it's the pairing. and the gun! So sexy.

How about a Norman-Sean Flannery-Marshall threesome. Maybe an appearance in later chapters? hmmm??? The boondock saints is one of my favorite movies of all time. I have incest all over my head everytime I watch it. Sean and Norman's so sexy.

I hope you update soon.

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