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April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man, that was very sexy. O_O I'm quite new to this pairing actually, but I'm becoming more partial to them by the minute. This was a very good story and I'm glad to have gone back through the pages on this forum to read it. Keep up the good work. ^^
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great... I like how you ended it, by the way. I think one of my favourite lines was the one about John Cena being a tease... :P
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent ending. It was the pizza boy that was doing all the work though. Heh heh. Well, I hope Bapizza had as much fun as Randy did. And I hope the pager was gay... raped pagers don't seem to work as well when their masters betray them.
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the second part was much improved over the first, good job!
seriously, i can't think of a sexier pairing than batista and randy orton, if you ever feel the whim, write more. the world cannot have enough hot WWE smut. especially smut that includes batista/randy orton cause that's just rrroWR
seriously, i can't think of a sexier pairing than batista and randy orton, if you ever feel the whim, write more. the world cannot have enough hot WWE smut. especially smut that includes batista/randy orton cause that's just rrroWR
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice ... would of preferred it to be longer and fill of more dirtyness!
Sequel? PLEASE!
~ Mercika
Sequel? PLEASE!
~ Mercika
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Randy is a cheap hoe. "I like that."
Be sure to let me know when you are completely finished with the second chapter, that way I can read the pure smut.
SMUT = GODLY.
Be sure to let me know when you are completely finished with the second chapter, that way I can read the pure smut.
SMUT = GODLY.
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey hun,
Awsome story! I can't wait to read all the hot-ness in the next chaperter!! kepp up the great work
Awsome story! I can't wait to read all the hot-ness in the next chaperter!! kepp up the great work
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kinky indeed. Though since when do sex-mad gay guys order ALL-DRESSED pizza? What a turn-off, JEEZ! ;) Well, I rated it the second-to-best one, so don't be mad at me. And I suppose now you want me to do the Google image search to get a better understanding of what the guys look like. I'll reluctantly do it.
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gahdamn!
Now I consider myself to be quite open-minded when it comes to slash fiction, I am, but dammmn - you totally nasty!
(take it how you want dude).
Peace.
Kaykyaka
Now I consider myself to be quite open-minded when it comes to slash fiction, I am, but dammmn - you totally nasty!
(take it how you want dude).
Peace.
Kaykyaka
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe. I don't think I'm _ever_ gonna look at pizza the same way again. I liked it and I hope you continue soon, if you decide to make more chapters.