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by DomesticFootcha

person Madyn Northam
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I've never reviwed this. >< *feels stupid*
This is EXCELLENT. I love it. I'm always totally pulled into it and waiiiting for the next chapters. Because you're one hell of a writer!
[the last thing I have to say is that I hope someone KICKS Kaoru. Or worse. >< At least, in this.]
person bunny_no_hoogle
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That bastard Kaoru!!!!!!! *gasps at saying such a thing* Poor Kyo! Poor Shin-shin! ARG!!! Ah, the ANGST (loves angst). I need to smoke a cigarette and listen to DEG on my iPOD so I can forgive Kao-kao. (Funny no matter the angst, Kyo-hun is the only one I don't get mad at for being a jerk. Though who could get mad at someone with a body and voice like that!). Hope you feel better soon Kyoko-chan!
person yami990
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please. kyo's gonna have playtime with shinya with it being shinya's first time doing anything that's really kinky. i wonder is shinya going to find he likes it kinky or is kyo goiing to have to get used to only plain sex? here's some nice hot pudding for writing such a good story so far. i look forward to the next chapters of this story. we still need more kyoxshinya fics on this site.
person yami990
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice lemon it was enough to get me dripping. what is going to happen with kyo and shinya now i wonder. hope it doesn't wind up with shin-chan hurt or kyo -chan for that matter. this was really good so here's a piece of choclate pudding pie.
person bunny_no_hoogle
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO KINKY!!!!!! That was awesome H___H My favorite line was definately "...the sex monster he called a lover." hehe!
person yami990
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please write more kyoxshinya goodness.
person DanSan
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, my time to say "It was amazing!"... o_O... XD... o.O, I mean, this fanfic! XD
I really like it, specially the part where Kyo asks if his nickname would be 'warumono' if the answer was 'no'... just lovely, now I'm gonna start to use it in my daily routine ^__^ thanks!..... Don't worry, I'll give you the credits!
Please, will you continue this fiction? I mean... I would like to see Kyo uke too... but that's up to you, ne? ^__^
Keep!
person bunny_no_hoogle
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yey! I was a tinsy bit worried that ch. 6 was the end, I'm so happy there is more! Hehe, I'd have miss-types if I saw that pic while I was writing too ^__^ I'd love to see it if you could send it to me. Yey for more KyoxShinya goodness!
person bunny_no_hoogle
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You poor thing! I've had that happen to me and I just wanted to cry and smoke (which doesn't seem to work well together) Good luck!!
person bunny_no_hoogle
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I'm reviewing again. This is so adorable, I can't help but grin when I'm reading it. And you update so fast! I don't think I've ever read Kyo and Shin-chan portrayed in this fashion (Shinya almost insainly innocent, and Kyo uber hentai) it makes it fun and interesting to read! Can't wait to read more!

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