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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good but also kind of funny with shinya over reacting to kyo unzipping his pants. please finish this chapter the story is very good so far.
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are a God. Ess.
Most people are lucky to update once every two weeks. ;_;
As good as it started. Oh, the drama! Oh, the suspense! You rock my world. ^__^
And careful with the grudge. It takes all those rules you ever had about the avoidance of ghosts and goes THWACK!
No longer can you hide under the covers.....
o_O
Most people are lucky to update once every two weeks. ;_;
As good as it started. Oh, the drama! Oh, the suspense! You rock my world. ^__^
And careful with the grudge. It takes all those rules you ever had about the avoidance of ghosts and goes THWACK!
No longer can you hide under the covers.....
o_O
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please.
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE!!
Pardon me, but I'm so happy. This is my ultimate favorite pairing, and there's a grand total of eight fanfics on them! Also, this one portrays them in a different light. Kyo is usually cuter and less preditorial/flat out bitchy, while Shinya is rarely super shy. Usually he's just cold/emotionless and a prude. You're doing great! Please keep it up!
Pardon me, but I'm so happy. This is my ultimate favorite pairing, and there's a grand total of eight fanfics on them! Also, this one portrays them in a different light. Kyo is usually cuter and less preditorial/flat out bitchy, while Shinya is rarely super shy. Usually he's just cold/emotionless and a prude. You're doing great! Please keep it up!
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD this is one of my favorite pairings!! <3 keep up the good work ^_^ you're writing is nice and the story is interesting to read, can't wait till the next chapter ^_~
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay >_> my whole review didn't go through, so here's the rest: you're writing is great and i love the story. nice take on how Shinya and Kyo act, i like it ^_^ can't wait till the next chapter!
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yey, kyo and shin-chan! I'm interested, please write more!!!!!