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Woah, this is gettin interesting!! Keep writing, you're doing great! xD

*murders Die* HOW DARE HE DO THAT TO SHIN-CHAN! :( That poor guy.

*hits Kaoru lightly with a paper fan* mean
I liked it! Though Totchi seems rather confused, I am sure that Shinya would be able to help him out alot *hint hint*

^_^ YAY! I heart Kaoru so much right now! *still having hatred towards Die though* (><)O'' *shakes fist at Die* grrr. You hurt Shin-chan's feelings. YOU MUST PAY!

Yey, KaoKao to the rescue! And Kyon-Kyon had a bigger part *pauses with hentai thoughts and grins*! WAI!!! I hope things work out for ShinShin

This is such a nice fic. It's loaded with sweet and funny moments, although definitely exploring the various types of funny... I like the playful attitude of the story very much, and the only thing I can complain about is that it seems to go a bit too fast. Plot-wise as well as text-wise. While the chapters are of nice length, the rushed writing style gives it them a real hurried feeling and tends to bother a bit as you instantly forget what you've read two paragraphs ago.
Otherwise it's a great fic and if you can manage to hold your horses just a little, I'll be sure to come back for more laughs.

more please. shinya molesting toshiya in the dressing room was hilarious and kawaii but die sucking him off right in the middle of the night was just slutty. this is a really good fic.

OOH! I like where this is going! More please! Onegai shimasu!

Aww, after reading about poor Shin-chan I'm not sure I can bring myself to finish the next chapter of Fun for All. Poor shin-shin *sniffle*

*clapping hands eagerly* YATTA! ^^ I so heart this story! I can't wait to find out who Totchi ends up with. Usually I'm KaoruxTotchi DiexShinya, but this story is kinda making me hope that Toshiya picks Shin-chan. ^^