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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Very visual and descriptive. As a request, if at all possible, you should write a chapter that has the same events in Zacky's point of view. That would make it a little more insightful.
Good story though.
Good story though.
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for Zacky.......but still.......'twas more awesomness.....
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Best story on AFF.
Ever.
I loved it.
Ever.
I loved it.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this. It was really good, though it kinda scared me. still, really, really good!
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, that was amazing. Poor Zackery! You should add on to this, sort of like a redemption chapter. Amazing stuff!!!
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That bothered me... I don't really like it like that. I'm sorry... It was good, though...
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoh, that was VERY visual...I could see it all happening in my mind o.0 it was good...lol poor Zacky