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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, your last author's note- I laughed out loud, totally. But getting back to the story: excellent. I love how "naive" (as Johnny put it) and childish you made Orlando in this story. I heartily enjoyed his innocence, and your dialogue was marvelous. I don't normally enjoy RP slash but this was realy spot-on and it didn't try to be something it wasn't. The bantering was great, and Orlando's geeky thrill over his first blowjob being a success was just too much to handle.
Great work.
Great work.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One of the view amazing slash stories on this site. REally well written
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh what a lusciously hot story! I enjoyed it very much.
Thank you.
Thank you.
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*keels over and DIES for the sexiness!!!*
Wow! That was so well written and SEXY! I really enjoyed seeing the cruel side of Johnny in the beginning and then watching it melt in the sensitive side...
~~Taima~~
Wow! That was so well written and SEXY! I really enjoyed seeing the cruel side of Johnny in the beginning and then watching it melt in the sensitive side...
~~Taima~~
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the best piece of shit I've read in a LONG time. Someone bless you. Loved it, fucking adored it. I really hope you write more on this pairing. You rock.
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutly beautiful. I enjoyed that very much...but I am tired and need a cold shower now...Thanks for the ride!!!!
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dont feel so guilty. im a sick-minded virgin who wants ass sex now. grrr...
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oi- need a cold shower now!Very realistic-an excellent story.
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was incredible, I love it!
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
E GADS! That was just..UH..lovely! I loved the gentleness and agressiveness combined all in one moment. You really are good! Such a lovely couple they are!!! MORE MORE!!! The headboard...the ...I am speechless. I am off to take a cold shower now!