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for The Babysitter

by redqueeninwonderland

person Anon
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story a bit too much i think. :) and i also love your very frequent updates!
person Iana
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:sigh: that was beautiful.
person G3ekStinkBreath
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I heart you dearly for the updates, they make me smile.
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh God! What now? Oh my God. I know, I know, I sound like a typical reviewer, but update soon please! Wow. It was so . . . I loved the illusion to artists in that chapter: Andy Warhol colors, an artist's eyes . . . I loved that. My favorite part was when they were standing in front of the mirror and she had that line about 'she though for maybe a second she saw what he saw' because it was just so . . .

Oh, update soon, please.
person Kyla
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is freakin' awesome, I love that you update so often
person ?
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its good.. But what exactly happened to Adrienne? Did i just miss something?
person punktodeath
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. I've read a few of the others on here and most are immature rubbish with Billie, Tre, or Mike leaping into some serious relationship with some girl they met a minute ago. Life doesn't always make sense, but at least its real, not some fairytale bullshit. I like your story for its realism and at the same time its utter fantasy. I like that you know about Billie, and yet you purposely change things so that it’s not really his life you’re writing about. Bravo, keep it up, in fact I check on this story daily and sometimes twice. Oh, and I love Ava. She's the cocky, yet truly insecure seventeen year old she’s supposed to be.
Brey
person warding_off_regrets
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! The suspense is murderous!

He's irresistible and he knows it...




person G3ekStinkBreath
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The suspense is murdering. I am waiting excitedly for the next installment.
person Jay.C
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! By far one of the best GD fanfics I've EVER read--and I read every single one;) I only review the ones I truely love...never stop updating!!!

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