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for Thunderlight - me, you and them

by Clitmenestra

person Cassie
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I got to wonder what will happen at the Red Web! I hope to read more soon! ^_^
person Sakuchan
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was so nice ^o^
I would have paid to see Kyo's face after that sentence of Toshiya eheh ^^
Please more!
Good job ^^
person Aiji
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drools* nice, me want more XD
person Toshide
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice one yet again
person Sakuchan
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your idea is very original,and I like your writing,is just right for a diary ^_^
Please more!
Good job!
person Cassie
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You make Kyo's mind so confusing to understand which seems like a good thing for your story mode! So Kyo is obsessed with Kaoru! Thats a great pairing choice! But I wonder if in your story Totchi doesn't have something for Kyo because it seemed Kyo was able to notice Totchi worring about him! I can't wait to read more! ^_^
person Toshide
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter yet again
person Skry
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
x_x Sounds Kinky. "Play me like he plays his ganesa." More please?
person Cassie
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The beginning was ok! I think this will turn out to be a good story! I hope to read more soon and find out what you intend to do with it! ^_-
person Medusa
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You'll have to write more so I can make a proper review.

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