rate_review Reviews

Wow, that's really cool what you did with the lyrics and everything. Vair cool ;)
-genna

I like the way you used the exact lyrics from the song in your story. As a Killers fan that added a real cool touch or effect on the overall story. I enjoyed it but I think you could elaborate more (not necessarily on the actually sex) on the story without it losing its charm. In fact the beauty in this work is the absence of some of the more detailed descriptions. Great work but a sequel or more chapters would be sweet.