rate_review Reviews

Usually I don't like one-shots, but this was perfect. I really liked it. Good work!

this was really sweet. i really think you are very talented and keep on with the good work.
this was wonderful. hugs and kisses, and don't stop writing such good fics!

i really liked this. I hope that maybe you will consider adding more? but if not then this is still amazing. GREAT job.

Not sure how I like this one, to be honest. I'm not really a slash fan because I feel like it has characters acting totally ooc sometimes, but I'm giving it a shot.

I'm intrigued to find out who raped him, does he know? The person knew his name which leads me to believe yes, especially since they seemed to be in room/suite of sorts that wasn't like some warehouse somewhere. I think my biggest issue right now pretty much revolves around the question 'how was this able to happen'?

I'm a huge stickler for believablity in fiction and if it isn't there then I don't read it. Because I'm distracting myself asking that question I'm not really letting myself enjoy the story. So maybe you should address it? I dunno. I'm not going to tell you how to write your fic because obviously you know what you want to write and kudos for choosing a topic that's relatively controversial. But yeah, other than that, I'd like to see what you do with it.

xox cherie,
Saphire

Awsome Awsome Awsome. Through and Through. <3