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for Slip of a Boy

by KarmaKiller

person ipsemes
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how evil, leaving off the next scene! i wait with bated breath for your next amazing installment!
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to cry. Seriously. That was so sad. I feel so bad for Billie. His kids, his wife. Mike . . . oh, Mike. He better fix Billie or I'm just going to scream and commit suicide. Don't apologize for this chapter it was great. It was awesome. You write great angst. I don't know what you're complaining about. It's the perfect amount of depression and resolve. Can't wait for another update!
person Druscilla Ryan
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! I love this. I love the build up. The 'masturbation' scene was the weirdest thing . . . I loved how that conveyed love and how you managed to put it into words. It was one of the most emotional/erotic things I've ever read.
person Emily
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is great, it is really is! I'm totally hooked, I love your style of writing, and Billie Joe...all I can say is 'awwww', even though it's fictional. Please write more soon, I'm begging you!

Love Emily xxx
person dunlop-1
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon...like, now! lol
person ThisIsGreenDay
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome. continue, you must.
person dunlop-1
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continueee...
person Druscilla Ryan
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh God. Please update soon. This is so good. I love it. So dramatic. I'm going to cry. So so so sad. I hate Billie being all sad and Mike not knowing what to do. Update soon please please please! Wahhhh!

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