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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Just hope that kind of shit never happens in real life...to anyone
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That ending was better than the last one!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that. was. fucking. amazing.
i. love. you.
YOU MADE ME CRY!!! but i loved it never the less. good ending.
i. love. you.
YOU MADE ME CRY!!! but i loved it never the less. good ending.
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, what a sweet ending!! I love it!!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you from Houston? E-mail me at GriffinRock14@aol.com and tell me.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My god that was good. So fucking good. So...gah. Here I go unable to express myself again. One line really stuck with me:
"...he smells clean, like the ocean."
Just...perfect. Perfect imagery with that.
"...he smells clean, like the ocean."
Just...perfect. Perfect imagery with that.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful ending! I loved it!! Have I mentioned recently that you're amazing? Can't wait for more of your work!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...I wanted to see who'd done it. It *was* a little "bleh", but not really. I think you should have had Billie Joe see the guy who had raped him, and then he could heal. But that's just my opinion. This is your story, after all. I liked the plot, though.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, yay for Mike.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That would be a scary thing to experience. Billie Joe's reaction is perfectly understandable, considering what happened to him. I wonder who did it. I hope you update soon! Billie Joe needs help!