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*Looks around for the tissue box* AWWWWW!!! I wanna cry now!! And only TWO left?? It can't be I refuse to accept that there's only going to be TWO chapters left. *Sits and pouts* I'm actually surprised that you're the frist person to ask about my name. Jake and Jack are twin brothers from ICP. I liked them a lot and they discribe how I write so I kinda stole them. Jack is the evil one while Jake is the good one. I like to think that when I write angst it's Jack taking over while when I write fluff it's Jake. I really don't know why I took both of the boys and made them mine. I just couldn't take one and leave one behind when they describe my fics so well. I guess I really never sat and thought about it I just knew they were two diferent aspects of the same personality. (Just me though). Keep writting I have to find out what happens!
JacktheSinister_JaketheJust
PS. I'm just one person. I don't think anyone could put up with two of me. *wonders if this helps you write faster for next chapter*

*hold breathe*
*passes out*
damn there is so much power in what you write!
i am far too interested in where this is going!
and i appreciate the update...i do ever so much
so ill just sit here and twiddle my thumbs till the next one(yes if you can believe it my life IS that interesting-jealous much- ;) )

I gotta say...YOU ARE SUCH A TEASE!! lol. Anyway, love the chapter! Man I thought kane was gonna explode and then Edge would'nt have his "pretty" face, what with the imprint of kane's fist in it and all. I can't belive you have just 2 more chapters. Please Please Please UPDATE SOON!

Oh my god! *cries* that was so sad.

it was so rediculous that i went 'OH MY FUCKING GOD' at the end of that-considering i had been mentaly begging for him to enter the whole time.
damn you! why have you not updated yet*shakes fist and groans*
and.i.nearly imploded with the chocolate and strawberrys *empties drool bucket a few times*

damn hooked!
so well done!!!

Wow! This is really starting to get good. Actually, it was always good. Update soon! *drools* Must read next chapter...must read next chapter...must read next chapter...must read next chapter...

*sits and stares* *Initial shock wears off* Ok I'm good now. You're so mean to us leaving us with the suspense of Kane walking in. That's so mean. other than that this chapter was long and exciting and filled with great twists. Update ASAP PLEASE!! It was so adorable and I can't wait to find out what happens.
JacktheSinister_JaketheJust

I am loving this fic! Its so cool! And don't worry too much about the spelling errors. I majorly suck at spelling as well(see there I can't even spell majorly) So you keep up the good work and don't stress out too much with the errors.

This is a great story, I would've posted sooner but I was to busy trying to finish it. Just incase I forget again you're a great writer, and I LOOVVVEE!!! your story. I think I'll like all the ones you write. Hasta Luego!

Yeah, finally. Once again, great chapter. Your little character skit inspired me not to forget. Keep it up!