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Great! Please finish and add some SEX!! Come on I need some sexual reading going on. Still Great though!

This chapter is awesome. I've been waiting for a while for it. The only compliant I have and it's not really a complaint as it is a opinion really. I though Kane was kinda creepy about the whole hair dresser thing, though the Jeff thing was cool. Other than that keep up the fantastico work and I'll keep reading. No lemon;.; I guess your right and it didn't fit. Too bad I was wondering what your brillient mind could come up with.

I think you are right about not sticking in a sex scene. I think its too early for that. You should let the charactors develop a 'ship first, then tackle a sex scene. Your doing a fab job. Update soon!

ohh youve got me hooked!! damn girl
and the spelling and grammer errors are becoming fewer and further between :):):):)
great story
excellent pairing;)
loving the speed with which things are progressing
you would have COMPLETLY turned me off the whole thing if you had have gone the PWP for this chapter
*thumbs up*
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We wanna see them have sex dammit!

I love this story! Update immediatly!

Im surprised i actually enjoyed this stroy i mean they r such an uncommon couple but i loved it soo plzz review

This chapter is very nice. It started out with a bit of flair (absolutely no pun intended) but then calmed down to reveal some deep interaction between the characters, making the build up of this story one of the best I've seen in a while. The chemistry between them is simply awesome, and the way you wrote Kane for this chapter was wonderful, adding another interesting turn to the story. He's just the kind of character who is expected to have some deep, dark secrets. I'm not sure how you're planning to get a lemon into the story so early on but I'm very interested to see how you pull it off, and otherwise see the story continued as a whole. Unfortunately you grammar and spelling are still getting more and more colourful, occasionally making your meaning pure guess work.
By the way, I'm flattered that my reviews make you happy.

Nice job so far, kid! There are a few grammatical errors that are sometimes annoying...."damn" is spelled d-a-m-n. Aside from these, you've got definite talent and I'm really looking forward to what happens next! On a side note: I'd be happy to try and beta for you, if you'd like.

Despite a few grammar and spelling errors I am really enjoying this fic! I really love Matt fics and I haven't read a Matt/Kane in a long time, so this is very refreshing. Keep up the good work!