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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic. Got alota angst in it but I'm all for it. Good Job. Keep up the good work. Kane Rules!!
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off WOW!! I love it. I never really thought of Kane and Matt as a pairing but the way you make it makes me want to read more. Keep up your writing at least so little poeple like me can read them. Please update as soon as you can and I'll reveiw again. Love the fic.
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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... The plot is really thickening. The way you you write the tension between Matt and Kane is simply fantastic, and it's obvious that there's room for more to build up there. It's true that they appear quite dramatic but it's in good proportions, fitting their characters and the setting perfectly. Your characterization of Edge is dead on for this story, he's really shaping up to be the bad guy we love to loathe. All those lies and the treachery... Completely WWE-scale drama there. The whole story so far is just wonderful and I'll be sure to wait for more.
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This fic certainly is unique. I don't think I've ever seen this pairing done before, but I can really see it working in this storyline. The story seems really great, and your characterizations are awesome. I definitely love the way you're showing Kane's hidden depths, and Matt's awesome, too. All those addicting twists and turns... You sure know how to captivate an audience! The slightly angsty ambience of the story is great and your writing style is very pleasant to read. The only complaint I have is your grammar and spelling. I seriously recommend getting a spell check, and preferably a good proof reader as well.