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for The Winter Guest *Complete*

by MissLizzie

person Katie
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story more and more with every chapter I get to read. But I don't like those cliffhangers, I really don't... So would you pretty pretty please update soon?

Oh, and let them get more action :)
person amy
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's good. cant wait for the next part!
person sunflower
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear, where are you? it's been over a week already! don't get to caught up in christmas preparations that you forget to post. after all:christmas comes every year but your story is one of a kind....;) anyway: i hope to read from you soon (if you don't post till tuesday i'll have to wait 'till January to continue this story 'cause my parents dont't have a computer -but don't feel like i put any pressure on you here *grins*)
I wish you a very merry christmas and a happy, healthy new year. sunflower
person Lucille
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARCH! I neeeeeeeed more!
person Anon
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story please update soon
person Erin
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh,no. Don't tell me its going to be in the news, well if it is in the news, please don't let Alan believe she did it on purpose, I won't survive.

P.S. You r a brilliant author!!!! Keep writing
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Moving my tongue around his dick




OMG! lol. Ok. Don't take this personally. This has nothing to do with your writing but I just couldn't stop laughing when I read this line. I kept thinking about the interview he gave where the hostess screwed up and introduced him as "Alan Dickman". I thought of this when reading the above line and started cracking up while thinking, "Geeze, this gives a whole new meaning to that interview introduction screwup!" and I just couldn't stop laughing!


Good story. I like it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Gem
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well I had reviewed this chapter and will do so again, even though I have no clue what I wrote!

I'm really not sure how this one will turn out, you've made a brave move and I like it.
person Livco
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no, don't use too much of swarf. This is a very sweet story and I love how you write.
person Gem
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know that AR is paparazzi material, he's famous but not that sort of famous. But, it was a nice bedroom scene. More would be good.

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