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for Piggy Back

by violetnoodle

person M1A1 Panda
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous! Few people can pull off the shorts and you do it quite well! It could use a little grammar touching-up, but nothing hugely major. The insinuation and suggestions put in poor 2D's head are sexier than any actual action taking place. I'm sure I speak for quite a few readers when I beg for more!
person OttPop
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more more more more more!!!!!!!!!!! oh, please XP
person CA$H
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES YOU ARE MY FAVOURITE AUTHOR, CAUSE I FOUND YOUR ANOTHER STORY TITLED "WRONG". NOW I WILL BE DYING WAITING ON THE CONTINUATIONS OF YOUR STORIES, SO PLZ!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE OF THIS STUFF, not that I want to rush you but I just can't wait as your fan.
person CA$H
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!!!!!!! YOU'LL BE MY FAVOURITE AUTHOR IF YOU'LL KEEP IT GOING, SO PLZ!!!!!!!!! Write more as soon as possible (and [if possible] alot of it *shy* ).
person Onnachan
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Goodness! *fans self* What a punch in that last paragraph! ;D Great little ficlet - will there be any more?
person Dana
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OPS!! Noodle is going to do really dirty thing, heheheh!!! Come on continue!!!!!!! XD
person Jade
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Slighty disturbing, but also very good. I liked it.
person Dana
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!!!! I want to know more for what gonna happend next!!!!!

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