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I really liked 1A and 1B - after that it gets kinda confusing. It seems the last three chapters are identical, and 2A and 2B are -in my humble opinion- poorer written versions of the idea of 1A and 1B. I'm not sure if you'll continue writing this, you probably won't, but if you do I think the best place to continue from would be the end of 1B.

Fantastic Erotic Tale! Gives new meaning to Spice Girls all over again.