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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The plot line is good, and I am enjoying the story, but you need a beta, you have too many spelling errors, which gives the impression that you hurried through it. This is not a flame, keep on writing, with a little care your spelling will improve.
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great
never red something like that
so emotional so powerfull
can't wait for the next chapter
keep it going
you are great
hana
never red something like that
so emotional so powerfull
can't wait for the next chapter
keep it going
you are great
hana