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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't mean this in any way to be an insult, but your story was really...well boring. I don't mean to sound mean, but it didn't have enough...i don't know, it just seemed to...tamed maybe, and quiet. I'm sorry. I really don't mean this to be a flame.
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Please more, I love it! Add more to this story I beg you! That was well written! I hope to read lots more stories by you as well! ^__~
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked expecially the first part,Toshiya's sentence was so funny XD The whole idea was intriguing ^^
I think you could have been more descriptive in the second part,but it's a good ff though ^o^
Please write more!
I think you could have been more descriptive in the second part,but it's a good ff though ^o^
Please write more!