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Oh no you don't!!!! You don't just stop like that, it's so not fair. I want to read more. *pouts*

Wow! I loved the begining of your story! I think the lemon was good and in time you will beable to write great ones! I can't wait to read more of the story! I wan't to know why Kyo is trying to hurt Totchi by calling their loving a mistake. I hope you let us into his past since he says he get's himself into this situation before. I wonder what Totchi will do to win his love! ^__~

Poor Toshiyaaaaaaaaaaa...Please update soon!~ I loved it.

NO the lemon dident suck, i like it! and now you need to post a second part sooon O.o