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for Breath on Me: Britney and Leo

by olptyr2001

schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm sorry. I'm not really the best with spelling or grammer. I use Open Office Writer and it doesn't check grammer like Microsoft Word does. But I'll read back through the story, find and correct any grammer errors I find.
person angexaime
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was a good story but you need to do a grammer check before you actually submit it. At first, I found myself hot. Near the end, however, I found myself finding corrections in the story and that's not fun. Please, check it next time.

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