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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brillaint so far.
A differant plot from the other VAM stories, one which Id love to see carry on.
I'm loving the in-depth-but-not-OTT feelings we see Bam experiencing.
Can't wait for another chapter.
H
A differant plot from the other VAM stories, one which Id love to see carry on.
I'm loving the in-depth-but-not-OTT feelings we see Bam experiencing.
Can't wait for another chapter.
H
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Honey you should defintely continue thos fic and soon, it's fantastic, and the plot has a lot of potential, there are so many ways you could go with this, I am dying for your next update.
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its good but not exactly engaging just yet.
This story would have alot of potential,
if you checked the spelling && grammer.
And if you didnt rush it. Dont get me wrong I think its ganna be good ;]
This story would have alot of potential,
if you checked the spelling && grammer.
And if you didnt rush it. Dont get me wrong I think its ganna be good ;]