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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS WONDERFUL!!! I love the emotion and the tension. Please tell me there's more coming.
~~Taima~~
~~Taima~~
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story please keep it up
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice work so far.... please update
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!! i freakin' love this story! at the moment i really need an orlando fix cos i just saw kingdom of heaven and i loved it cos he can act in this one unlike in troy and and and ...heh yeah just a little obsesed. and dont worry to much cos your main character doesnt really come off as a mary sue. she's actually very good for an own character.anyways... update soon cos this story rox!
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I'm not a crazy Orlando fan or anything, can't say I like his roles much, but I think he's a pretty cool guy in real life, based on what I've heard, of course. This story emphasizes that, you definitely know how to keep the reader's interest! Keep going with this! :)
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So glad you're continuing this! It's my favorite on the site so far. I love the banter and easy interaction between them, and Sierra's a great OC.
Very good, update soon!
XO
Eliza
Very good, update soon!
XO
Eliza
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing.
More please!
More please!
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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've got to keep writing this. It's really a gem. Love it.
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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww! this is such a good story! it actually has a PLOT! wow. plots are ALWAYS good. I'll be checking for updates!
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm greatly surprised with this Fiction; I was expecting what one usually reads in a category that tweens love to write in... Mary-Sues, expectations in him, "falling in love with her instantly", etc. But from what I can tell, it won't turn out like that at all - I like how she's independent and the nicknames. ;)
If you would like any help... even with someone just looking over it to see any mistakes before you post it, I would love to help. Or even to bounce ideas off of... You're welcome to email me :)
-Grace
If you would like any help... even with someone just looking over it to see any mistakes before you post it, I would love to help. Or even to bounce ideas off of... You're welcome to email me :)
-Grace