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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your story is really good! Please update soon, because I'll die if you don't. Okay, maybe not really. I'll only die on the inside. But I really want to know what happens next and what Ville's hiding!!
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June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. just wow. my favorite part was part 8 for some reason. those last three lines just got me, you know? also, aren't you on lj?
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June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm intruiged, despite myself. I'm such a bterrier when it comes to a mystery, so I'm dying for the next part. This is gripping, and some minor grammatical issues aside, it's well written.
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June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
terrier, sorry. I hate typos.
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May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bamtatistic!!!!!!! update badly needed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this story
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May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE FINISH!!!!!!!!!!! IVE READ ALL THE VILLE AND BAM STORIES ON HERE AND THIS IS THE BEST ONE!!!!! PLEASE FINISH IT!!!! I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
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May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it right more soon
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May 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE THIS IS LIKE THE 3rd TIME IVE REVIEWED! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!! I HAVE TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! *cries* IM BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!! PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
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May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*all the exploded pieces of exploded me explode*
gbxjdhbj update!!!!!
gbxjdhbj update!!!!!
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May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!! I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!! PLEASE FINISH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!