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This is a very cute little story with a definite feel-good quality to it, the kind that leaves the reader smiling in the end. I think it does everything you were hoping it to achieve. It's nicely written, portraying a lot of feelings from the beginning to the end. The main characters could've been brought out a little stronger, instead of focusing on dropping names as it made Gackt's little love sickness seem a bit out of proportion. Hyde's well-staged seduction was well done, and the smut didn't hurt the fic at all.