rate_review Reviews

Oh wow, you struck my curiousity - Please continue, lovin it so far ^^

woke up thinking of this creepy story and had to read it again today

ah.the suspense.its killing me.no doubt it will be a hit like all your other stories.

Oh! This is great!!! I love this story. Hope to see what's going to happend to poor Orli soon XD

I already posted a comment on your LJ, but I just wanted to let you know again how awesome this story is. You must update it soon!

I need more... whats gonna happen to poor Orli.

Wow...this is so promising! (And who doesn't love Orlando torture?)
I don't usually read Celebrity fiction either...but this is very well written.
O.o I love the part on the water and all the suspense! I was 'freaking out' slightly at some points.
[“Well, what if they don’t come back?”]XD!
So update soon! Please continue!

There is not one dull moment in this entire chapter. It's fast-paced, keeping one on the edge of their seat throughout. You know how much I love that! ^_^

This creature is one creepy mother fucker. Seriously. Maybe it's because it reminds me of the grudge girl... when she's in the corner of the room. All that black hair... and smoky stuff. *shivers and hides* But I love the horror elements within this story... it just grips a reader even more. Not only is there suspense, but angst and some comedy mixed in. Lovely. ^_^

I loved the chase scene. I loved it when Judy was eaten... that's some crazy stuff right there. o_O I loved it that no matter how crazy everyone that he was, Orlando was far from it. Poor bloke. *sighs*

He's in for it now! I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Keep up the wonderful work, lovie.

Great beginning! Very well written and VERY EXCITING! Please post a note when its finished so I can read the rest!

*shivers* ohhh this is well done and very spooky! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!