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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you are going to write a follow up to this, you must I have so many ideas of how much Kaoru can "posses" Kyo *giggle*
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow,your ff is wonderful! *_*
I think you should keep on writing this one!!! It could have lot of interesting sequels.... ^^
A great job with one of my favourite pairings,please continue!
I think you should keep on writing this one!!! It could have lot of interesting sequels.... ^^
A great job with one of my favourite pairings,please continue!
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* i have to admit that was a funny story. Even funnier that i could really see kaoru saying that stuff to himself even if he wasn't a kelpto.
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This...this was amazing! It was so good that I actually got excited. I pictured everything perfectly. You have a way with words my dear. Wonderful job.
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah, that was so funny!
I almost died when he just beat Kyo over the head with a rock~ xD
wonderful story, indeed. <3
I almost died when he just beat Kyo over the head with a rock~ xD
wonderful story, indeed. <3
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O more?? PLEASE?
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^_____^ This story is funny and hot at the same time! XD I loved it ^_^ Please write more of this in the future!
btw: will this be continued? Or is it the end? ^_^
btw: will this be continued? Or is it the end? ^_^
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD I laughed fso hard at the starting! But owah this is loved :3 i hope you write more to this!! i would love to see Kyo change..-snicker-
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear...It's so.........hot *0*~~~ Other than the obvious fact that KaoruxKyo is my OTP, I just love the description so much. It's highly original and not OOC at all...I like it when Kyo's the uke -snicker- xD;~!
Awesome fiction, and I didn't see anything bother me either. Which is pretty much great since I always look for something to critisize (i love/support constructive critism). But it's perfect the way it is...
So I want more~! XDD More! more!
Awesome fiction, and I didn't see anything bother me either. Which is pretty much great since I always look for something to critisize (i love/support constructive critism). But it's perfect the way it is...
So I want more~! XDD More! more!
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh more^^ please write more^^ This is awsome...to amusing and hot at the same time...please tell me therte is more??