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for The trouble with unfaithful lovers

by jaymclg

schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapters one through eight

Brilliantly written character interaction (with drama, and tenderness too), dialog, plot, and the characters' emotions due to the circumstances in their lives. I also enjoyed the strength of the friendships in the four main characters.

I would love to see some LEMONS between David and Billie (pregnant ladies can be extremely horny you know).
;~D

I'm looking forward to additional chapters.

Well done--keep up the good work!
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!
person Jade
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!! I want to know what happens next!!!

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