rate_review Reviews

Well, first of all, your style and your writing are impeccable. I mean it, you could be a pro. But perhaps you could work on discerning the characters a little, what with the countless he-pronouns it's hard to tell who's doing what and to whom, heh. In any case, I believe this is the start of a very good story. Perhaps the only thing that puts me off it is, that it's more of an original fic than a fanfic, so it seems like you could have chosen any character names for it. AU stories tend to be like that, which the main reason why I rarely even read them. But I gave it a shot and I must say that if I ignore what I just said...it will be great. As long as you stay humble but true to your own plans, I'll be reading this. Cheers.

i liked it! i want to know what happens next between frank and gerard! mor please?

That was so hot. lol. Really well written as well.

Yeah, Writers. lol This was really good. Took me about two hours to read, granted I had a few interuptions. But it was definately worth it. I liked it a lot and I can't wait to read more from you!

~LilyRose~