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for Playing With Fire

by classic06

person Mo56
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aw poor kelly! carrie just needs to hug her all night long until the girl is happy again! nice update
person Mo56
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so i'm getting bored at work and i need my CALLY fix. lol hope the next update is as awesome as the last!
person Violence
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I coulda sworn I had reviewed this one. Oh well. I never understood why Jason worried so much about Kelly driving. I mean it's not like she's gonna go race a semi down the interstate, especailly not when she's got such precious cargo. "I would call you five, but I've never met a horny five year old." - one word: lmao. Man, Kelly should've known she was gonna get busted as soon as Ashley saw her. Nooooooo. *tear* Not the pictures! Damn, Jeanne. When will that woman learn? Probably when Kelly gets beaten by an angry mob at the rate she's going. But then again, major awwwwwwwww at Carrie's parents checking up on Kelly and the girls sending each other flowers. Sweetness.
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I kinda hope that Kelly handles this whole picture thing well, not because it isn't emotional, but it'd be nice to see her reacting to problems in a better way because of Carrie. What Jeanne did was horrible, and so not a mom thing to do, I hope Jason says something to her. Or maybe Kelly's sister can say something (sorry I can't remember her name). Also, I laughed over Ashley and Kelly's exchange over the hickey. Very cute update, sorry I didn't reply sooner.
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww....well, boo on the pictures being splashed all over the tabs. I cannot wait to see how Kelly reacts to this, but I'm glad that, hopefully, Carrie will be with her when she finds out. BTW, man, your version of Jeanne...not nice. lol. But you've done an amazing job with this story! :)
person greens
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome as always-sorry I haven't reviewed lately-computer issues-butt all is well now in computer land. I love how the girls are so sweet to each other-Kelly is gonna be crushed when she finds out her mon released those pics to the press. Can't wait for more. Great job!!
person Mo56
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait to see how kelly reacts to the pictures. but they're still so cute together when they're "going at it" lol.
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I knewwww it...i knew that Jeanie looking through kellys room would come back and haunt us!!! dammit1!! its gunna make Kelly so sad:(:( But Carrie is being so strong!!I cannot wait for the next chapter!!! GREAT JOB!!
person Mo56
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
absolutely fabulous chapter! i was scared when i read the kelly was gonna drive...but they're both safe. so, super! keep up the great work.
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I found the conversation between Kelly and Keith very nice; I know that's kind of generic, but it was cool seeing her and Keith talk like people who are in the same club. Just having a normal convo about their girls :) The update didn't seem shorter, if anything, it was really full because of how Carrie and Kelly interacted with each other. It was also sweet seeing Carrie make Kelly breakfast, it just shows how much they care about one another.

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