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by classic06

person Violence
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Meh, I'm not gonna be as quick with the reviewing for like the next two months. Pfft, it figures Kelly would be outta the loop about Urban's wife being preggers. Uh oh, I smell evil bassist troubles around the corner. When Kelly made the comment about scratch marks down Carrie's back and she went oooo, I giggled. It's just a funny image. Again I say - How effin adorable. It's just so damn sweet that Kelly would drive to Kansas instead of flying all for Carrie's conscious and well being. And that whole conversation about how Carrie was lying when she said she didn't love her was seriously a long awwww moment. My heart's been melted so many times it's been impossible to keep track of everytime it's happened. I'll never get tired of this one.
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww i loveedddd it!! Kelly would do absultly anything for carrie its adorable!!
person Junkyxl
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really cute chapter, I loved it! I laughed really hard during the airport scene, I could totally see it happening in my head, the whole 'I changed my mind, I don't love you' was really funny. But wow, you're updating like 3 stories at the same time, that's gotta be hard, I mean how do you keep up with the plot?! Really cool, can't wait for more.
person Violence
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! 69! Funny how this is the sex chapter too. Seriously though, girls, horny much? I agree with Kelly, sex as a bargaining chip is inhumane. I found it completely adorable that Kelly was screwing with Carrie's concentration just by staring at her. And when Kelly attempts to not look at her like that and it doesn't work so they take a break and have sex in the bathroom. I'm surprised they didn't break the stall door down; those things aren't sturdy at all, lol. *sigh* There's no way I could not love this update 'cause it's like... whoa, awesome. If this Mark guy gives them a hard time or any problems Carrie should fire his sorry ass so fast he won't even know he was fired until three days after.
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't tell you how excited I was to see so many updates when I got to check the site :) Carrie better watch out with her bass player/musical director- I'm glad Kelly noticed the looks the guy was giving. I just love them being so cute and teasing with one another. It was cool to see Carrie getting to be the one that was being watched- did that make sense? It's usually like Carrie gushing over Kelly, it was nice to see the reverse. Awesome update.
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i always get so excited when I see this story has an update!! i love how the story has gone from Kelly touring to Carrie!!! its gunna be exciting to see what Carrie has to go through and how they are going to handle everything!!! great update!!! the bathroom scene was sooooo hott!!!! WOOT WOOT!!;) haha great job
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Um, "so...yeah." That was hawt! lol. No seriously, I loved that update. I'm digging that your incorporating the tour with Keith. (Which was awesome, btw!). It was funny that he caught them red-handed. I could so hear him speaking. Weird left-handedness on my part, I guess. Anyway. I love that your ClarkWood are a couple of horndogs. lol. I'm curious to see what happens with the bass player, though. Leave our girls alone, you jackass. You work FOR her. ;) So can you tell I can't wait for more? :)
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* Confession: Total sap here...so I LOVED THAT! Great update, really. I love what you've done with this story...can't wait to read more!
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm going to try to be coherent, but it's almost four am and I've been packing since... crap I can't even remember. Anyway, that was a sweet chapter, and even though there was some crying, it totally made me smile :) Thanks. I know this is probably strange, but I was really glad that Carrie gently brought up about how Kelly's mom might never accept them. Kelly's been back and forth on her mom, but it was just the way Carrie worded it, Kelly didn't have much of a reaction at all- and I think that's a good thing. When it all started, Kelly would get so upset at the thought of her mom never changing her mind. I think it says a lot for how much Kelly has come to realize what Carrie means to her, and that she's dealing with her mom issues. That was a lot to write for such a small exchange, but I wanted to say that I thought you did it well. Also, I loved Carrie's line about Reba interrogating her, and of course, I loved the end.
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok soo i really really enjoed this update....this story just keeps getting better and better!!!! i cant wait for when Carrie is on tour and Kelly gets to wait for her off the stage!!! SOOO EXCITEDD!!anyways awsome update:):)

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