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Nice update-as always. I never expect anything less from you-so high expecations & U always deliver. I have so enjoyed watching this fic grow & how U are showing the girls deep feelings & love for one another-it is very romantic. I love how they are so supporative of each other & Kelly's team look out for both girls. Awesome job!!!

I have tried twice to leave U a nice long review-I don't know if the last 1 took or not. My computer keeps freezing up when I try to review a fic. Sorry-in case my last review didn't take-Awesome job...

I love the mindless fodder that made up this chapter. Lol, interrogated by Reba. Seriously, Kelly is a hot momma. Although I think the legion of kezbos speaks for itself. Carrie proposing? Is that a reference for what might be happening in the future? 'Cause that would be the best ending ever. And then the ending had me in the awww. There's something so sweet about Kelly crying when Carrie tells her just how much she loves her. Tugging at the ole heart strings.

I giggled when Kelly threatened to bite Alyssa's husband (sorry I can't remember his name). It's cool that her sister's family got to come to a show, but it's even better that Alyssa got to talk with Kelly. After the stuff with their mom, family support is always good. Cute update all the way around :)

I just got caught up w/ Ch's 66 & 67 & they both were really good. I am still enjoying your writing very much. I think U have such a talent at writing 2 people in love. I am not surprised that Kelly's mom still doesn't support her- by picking outside the concert was even low for her. Can't wait for the next update. Thanks.

I swear I have some kind of a 6th sense that tells me there's an update just waiting to be read. Wow, they learned to lock the door, what an achievement, lol. Man, there's something about Kelly and kids that just makes the heart melt. Lmao at the Carrie being old and wrinkly in 10 years. I seriously doubt that. Awww, Noah is such cutie. I love the fact that Kelly's getting full support from her sister because something tells me she really really needs it. When Kelly found that sticky note from Carrie in her bible i melted to a puddle right then and there. It was just so freaking sweet. Yeah, I awwed at the ending. Good stuff.

Ok, so this was beyond cute. I love that little Noah as a crush on Carrie. And Carrie’s comment about him having Kelly’s eyes and that meaning she couldn’t turn him down? Cute squared! That whole interaction about “old and wrinkly” Carrie was adorable. I wouldn’t kick a 35-year-old Carrie out of my bed. ;) Kelly’s mom makes me sad, but I feel that’s pretty realistic, so props there. I'm really glad Alyssa has been that supportive, btw. Oh, and the best part for me was Carrie marking that Corinthians quote in Kelly’s bible. (Awwwww). Seriously. You are an amazing writer…and I cannot wait to read more! :)

yeah yeah yeah i ment to write "Can" and not "Cant"...ill make sure to check my spelling the next time I review I promise. (I feel like a scolded 6th grader by the way)-->hahahaJJJKK...but no really thanks for making my gramatical errors evident to everyone, made me giggle a little bit:P:P haha!!SO about the update!!! You know who I would think mean mean mean mean MEANNNN things about...is Kelly's mom. !! Quite honestly she must be the biggest BIOTCH everr!! Who abandons their daughter just like that!!!(I know its just a story i know) but still the "character" mom is totally in need of a ass kicking!!But the way Kelly and Carrie take care of eachother is so adorable, it brings tears to my eyes! Carrie always wants to protect and hide any pain from Kelly. I Love it! O annndd i really enjoyed your Bible citing! It's truly what makes you so different from all the other authors, its the research and care and passion you put into everything you write. You didnt have to site the Bible or many of the other things you just sneak into your writing, but you do, and not many will realise it but it makes your stories that much more real to the imaginary mind. If you get what i Mean? its hard to explain. Great update!!!!
P.S- I could SOOO kick your Ass in Scrabble!!

Glad taht ua re back w/ an update. Great as always.Love how supportative Carrie is. Currious as to what Kelly's mom has to say.

What was up with Jeanne asking if Kelly and Carrie could pretend to break up? Does she think that if Kelly agreed o that, that Kelly would like learn to not be around Carrie? She really hates Carrie, she's always hateful, but what she's doing to Kelly is worse. Carrie can just ignore and get angry with Jeanne, but Kelly has to try to reason it out because her mom is saying that it isn't Kelly's fault. Random, but I really hope no one gets kidnapped.